雅思写作开篇段赏析(9月3日真题回忆)

2016年9月3日真题回忆

题目:Some people think that more TV channels provide more choices, while others believe that more TV channels only result in poor quality of TV programs. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

答案/宝龙Chris 原创

(8-9分) Less is more. A viewer staying home, watching a regular TV show does not imply any complaint of no additional channels. Instead, an upcoming well-plotted drama could serve just right for him, who wanted to really enjoy that moment alone rather than toggling around with his remote control infinitely, wasting time. So why the distraction?

打碎题目法。

(7-8分) More TV channels can mean differently. From the positive perspective, more TV shows on air suggests more options by the viewers, while at the same time, it also kicks off the concern about possible poor quality that may sprout up as something negative. Personally, I would not consider it a smart move if more TV shows are to be on the screen.

抓住重点法。

(6-7分) TV is part of our life and we cannot live without it. Recently, a debate has heated up as to whether more TV shows should be aired. Some people regard it as a good thing because we can choose from a variety of channels, while others view it as the start of poor quality of TV programs. In my opinion, I agree with the latter for the following reasons.

结构清晰法。

(5-6分) Every coin has two sides. Some people think that more TV channels give people more choices to watch something they like, while others believe that more TV channels only result in very bad TV programs. In my opinion, I think people should watch less channels.

背中式模板法。

(4-5分) I agree good quality. TV is good for our health and mind. We need good TV.

无章法。

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